I need your opinion!!?

It's not bad, and it's very good for your age. For however old you are (11?12?) it is very mature and very well written. You have a great talent and you need to keep up with writing, because if you're that good now, think about when you're older. Good luck and I think you have a great poem :) Answer mine? a href="http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20100206164628AAL5mTr"http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?…/a