RHH: Rate/Hate the new verse?

It's fairly good. Your lyrics and rhymes are nice for the most part. Your flow in some lines is off but it all depends how you spit it. May I point out one thing though? Correct me if I'm wrong of course, but your line where it goes "...for a whole eternity"...it's kind of bad phrasing/grammar. Like you can't have a half an eternity you know? If you had it "for an eternity" it would be fine but thats just something I thought I'd point out. But f*ck it, screw my opinion if you want lol. 7/10."for an eternity" it would be fine but thats just something I thought I'd point out. But f*ck it, screw my opinion if you want lol. 7/10.